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My six sentences are from my short story, Positional Sacrifice. Last week we left our lovers in the shower, his blue eyes widening as she started to lick her way up. . .
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The excitement that she was going to slide her mouth over the head of his penis made him groan, a deep, primal sound. He could feel surging energy, like electricity, radiating off her. The thought that she wanted his cock as much as he wanted her mouth around it was driving him crazy.
Holding his penetrating gaze, she slid her soft lips over the head, slowly lowering her mouth around his throbbing erection. She swirled her tongue downward around his shaft. Gasping he pulled her away, urgently needing to thrust himself, hard and deep inside her.
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I really appreciate your comments, so please if time allows, I would love to know what you think. This week, I want to share with you an intensely erotic poem that has been seducing me in my dreams.
I like my body when it is with your
by e.e. cummings
i like my body when it is with your
body. It is so quite new a thing.
Muscles better and nerves more.
i like your body. i like what it does,
i like its hows. i like to feel the spine
of your body and its bones, and the trembling
-firm-smooth ness and which i will
again and again and again
kiss, i like kissing this and that of you,
i like, slowly stroking, the shocking fuzz
of your electric fur, and what-is-it comes
over parting flesh… And eyes big love-crumbs,
and possibly i like the thrill
of under me you so quite new.
I leave you to continue your Six Sunday escapes, and thank you so much for stopping by. I hope you have a wonderful week, full of cheeky smiles, love and laughter. Take Care.
Loving his urgency in this snippet. Great job!
Ohh, hot six!
Sizzling six!
A smokin’ excerpt!
Hot!
She sounds like a real professional!
So I get a hot six, a great poem and the loveliest of images. You really know how to deliver, hon! :)
~Xakara
Dawn’s Early Light 6SS
wow, hot six! Intense description.
Well I believe I need a cold shower. I could step right into that visual image you wrote and join them it’s so well done.
Oh Gem, thank you so much. I really appreciate all the comments.
Hiot six! A great start to my Sunday morning LOL
Wow, now I need a shower…a cold one! Hawt! And I absolutely love that poem by e.e. cummings! One of my favorites.
Holy Smokes, Batman! Very erotic shower scene!
Hot, hot, hot! Great six.
And I thought she was going to be a tease and make him wait, lol. Another great snippet, Alix! Fab poem, too!
He is having trouble keeping control, he wanted to savour her, but he just can’t seem to mange it. I’m sure she’ll work out a way though ;)
Now that’s what I call a steamy shower scene. Great job!
HAWT six…and what a piccie! Phew. Cold. Shower. Needed.
Great! Loving some shower scene… :-)
wow! I need a cold shower!
Hot six!!
Well that’s a hot…shower.
Very hot!
Talk about a steamy shower. I loved how urgent he wanted her there you could really feel his need. I’m drooling!
Amazing urgency, and yet he’s till considerate enough not to choke her. Great six.
I’m just so glad you followed on from last week – hot six :)
Sexy snip!! Hot and tasty!! *winks*
Very sexy six! Nothing like pushing a man to lose his control.
Smokin hot! Great image and description. :)
Terrific tension! I love shower scenes; water is just sexy stuff.
Damn, girl! All I can do is agree with everyone else. Hot, hot, hot.
pretty hot scene!
Great scene, showing the needs of each of the lovers. Excellent six!
Oh, my…. And absolutely nothing wrong with that pic! Great way to start the morning. :)
I think I’m going to need a cold shower after that
Hot, hot HOT!
Oh yeah. That’s hot
Whew, and I thought it was hot outside – the temperature just soared, lol. Love the ee cummings poem too, thanks for sharing.
Excellent 6
Scorching six, Alix! Enjoyed the erotic poem as well! :)
Now he definately can’t wait any longer….maybe he should turn the shower onto cold!
Very evocative poem…great six Alix …:) Keep them coming….oopps sorry about the pun ha ha
Firecracker hot! They aren’t the only ones wanting more! Great six!
Damn! That’s awesome. Great six as always! Also, I LOVE ee cummings.
Very hot six!
Wow Wow Wow
Terrifically hot six and I’ve always loved that poem but it’s been a long time since I read it, so thanks for including it!
Your six sizzles! Love the poem, too.
Definitely sexy. I like the feeling of slow motion in her actions juxtaposed with his wanting fast and hard. Great scene!
Steamy action in the shower–an erotic six! Thanks for the e e cummings poem, hadn’t seen that one. The picture made me think how difficult it is to remove wet blue jeans–LOL!
Very erotic 6….hot hot HOT!
Wow, super hot! Love shower scenes.
Alix, that was a great way to warm up these cold bones on winter day. Excellent 6 and a very sensual poem.
xxx
Very hot.
Oh my. *blush*
Joyce
http://joycelansky.blogspot.com
Smexy Six!
Kally
Seriously, that was hot!!
Very hot!
Very hot! I definitely feel the energy they have together.
Love the poem, too. I have a soft spot for e. e. cummings.
Hot six! And that pic is totally droolworthy!
I think this week’s six are even sexier than last week’s.
Oh Ranae, Thank you. I’m looking forward to finishing the edits so I can put the whole story up.
Very hot! I like. :D
Lori
Super hot 6! Definately got my blood pumping this morning :)