Six Sentence Sunday 4

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My six sentences are from my short story, Positional Sacrifice. Last week we left our lovers in the shower, his blue eyes widening as she started to lick her way up. . .


The excitement that she was going to slide her mouth over the head of his penis made him groan, a deep, primal sound. He could feel surging energy, like electricity, radiating off her. The thought that she wanted his cock as much as he wanted her mouth around it was driving him crazy.

Holding his penetrating gaze, she slid her soft lips over the head, slowly lowering her mouth around his throbbing erection. She swirled her tongue downward around his shaft. Gasping he pulled her away, urgently needing to thrust himself, hard and deep inside her.

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I really appreciate your comments, so please if time allows, I would love to know what you think. This week, I want to share with you an intensely erotic poem that has been seducing me in my dreams.

I like my body when it is with your
by e.e. cummings

i like my body when it is with your
body.  It is so quite new a thing.
Muscles better and nerves more.
i like your body.  i like what it does,
i like its hows.  i like to feel the spine
of your body and its bones, and the trembling
-firm-smooth ness and which i will
again and again and again
kiss,  i like kissing this and that of you,
i like, slowly stroking, the shocking fuzz
of your electric fur, and what-is-it comes
over parting flesh… And eyes big love-crumbs,

and possibly i like the thrill

of under me you so quite new.

I leave you to continue your Six Sunday escapes, and thank you so much for stopping by. I hope you have a wonderful week, full of cheeky smiles, love and laughter. Take Care.

65 thoughts on “Six Sentence Sunday 4”

  1. And I thought she was going to be a tease and make him wait, lol. Another great snippet, Alix! Fab poem, too!

    1. He is having trouble keeping control, he wanted to savour her, but he just can’t seem to mange it. I’m sure she’ll work out a way though ;)

  2. Now he definately can’t wait any longer….maybe he should turn the shower onto cold!
    Very evocative poem…great six Alix …:) Keep them coming….oopps sorry about the pun ha ha

  3. Definitely sexy. I like the feeling of slow motion in her actions juxtaposed with his wanting fast and hard. Great scene!

  4. Steamy action in the shower–an erotic six! Thanks for the e e cummings poem, hadn’t seen that one. The picture made me think how difficult it is to remove wet blue jeans–LOL!

    1. Oh Ranae, Thank you. I’m looking forward to finishing the edits so I can put the whole story up.

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