Six Sentence Sunday 45

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My six sentences today are second in celebration of the blogs 1st Anniversary. These are the second six sentences of I Want it to be You, an erotic story. Next week we will be continuing with Flushed With Lust

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You can have my breasts in your hands, a nipple in your mouth, my cleavage around your cock, at any time that it pleases you.

As I approached the dinning table, you were tapping at a spot near the edge, it seemed to be wet. Deliberately you bent down and forcibly licked it away, startling me, stopping me dead in my tracks. You looked up, glaring at me.

“You’ve been playing with yourself without asking!”, then you demanding questioned,
“Did I say you could take off your knickers?”

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read more……I Want it to be You

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26 thoughts on “Six Sentence Sunday 45”

  1. And I’m for certain that was a great six but that picture on the front page with her shoving her hand down his pants… Holy dooley, Lady. Hot. Yes. Sorry. Wonderful 6! You know I love your stuff. Oh, and he’s being all demanding. Love.

  2. Hi Alix. This is another great 6, but I have a couple of suggestions for changes, in true Andrew form!

    Actually, the changes are in Stephen King form; I am most of the way through his “On Writing: A Memoir of the Craft”. Great book. As he would say, rollicking read!

    So the suggested changes are as follows:

    You can have my breasts in your hands, a nipple in your mouth, my cleavage around your cock, any time it pleases you.

    As I approached the dinning table, you were tapping at a spot near the edge, it seemed to be wet. Deliberately you bent down and forcibly licked it away, startling me, stopping me dead in my tracks. You looked up, glaring at me.

    “You’ve been playing with yourself without asking! Did I SAY you could take off your knickers?”

    I think it’s pretty clear who is doing the talking, and HOW it is being said, from the text. That fluff in between the speech just adds fluff, not necessary information.

    Nice work and happy anniversary.

  3. I’d be tempted to grab his balls and squeeze ’em til he yelped, just to remind him who’s *really* in charge. ;)

  4. Now isn’t she a minx! Acting badly on purpose, perhaps? Why else leave a little tell-tale trace on the dining table? Love these characters! He’s all about forcefulness it seems. Great six!

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