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and more from Flushed With Lust. Our hero challenged by his ex lover, struggles between lust and the feeling he is losing control. Last week he did as she asked but was left wondering if it was him or control that was turning her on. So he starts to turn the tables…
I seem to be continually playing with the tense in this story.
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She stiffened with anticipation. I left my hand around her wrists, tightening my grip, my other hand moving up between her parted thighs. I moved her underpants to the side and with two fingers, not one, slide them straight up inside her. All the while looking composed and casual but firmly keeping her gaze. I pulled them out and she watched, her heart pounding as I bought them up to my lips. The crowd unaware of her wetness all over them, I sucked it off.
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Read the last 7 snippets for Flushed With Lust, if you would like to catch up:
…..SS 36…..SS 37…..SS 38…..SS 39…..SS 40…..SS 41…..SS 42
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Very Hot! Nice to see him finally getting his equilibrium back. Can’t wait to see what happens next! Great six, Alix!!
Steamy! Nice!
So sensual. When are we going to get to the read the whole thing?
So hot, I need a fan. You need to finish and start selling this puppy! I want, want, WANT it. :D
Hot damn that was smoken. I loved it!!
Holy Chmoly, Alix. Composed, casual as he did all that. What a guy!
Hot and sensual moment! Wow!
VERY sexy!!
Very hot six!
A crowd!? Didn’t see that coming. Very hot
My own love life isn’t this hot. Heck, I don’t even know what I’ve been doing in my marriage — not this! LOL. Excellent. Excellent. HOT. And, the crowd at the end, really surprised me.
Wow steamy! Good 6 … phew gonna have a cold shower now lol
Oooh, very hot. Nice six!
warm in here isn’t it? yeah tense can be a bitch
Mmmmm…very sexy.
Hot and sexy
He has been off balance but apparently he’s moving on – wait, crowd???? Didn’t see that coming. Terrific six!
Whew! It is definitely hot in here! Sexy six.
So very sexy! :)
and a twist at the end, which raises the stakes.
Wow!!. The crowd at the end was a bit of a shock. It seems like’s he’s gotten his equilibrium back. Nice job!
They drew a crowd? Why am I never in the right place at the right time? ! LOL Hot, hot six!
Wow! Hot six! Nice!
Way to turn things around on her. May be her turn now? ‘Crowd unaware’ is a really nice touch. Great work, Alix!
I love how this gets so inside his head
There’s a crowd? That was unexpected.
Yes! He’s getting his confidence back. I love seeing that. Phew, hot scene!
Yum. That’s all I have to say. ;-)
Sexy, love these snippets Alix!
Sizzling! I had to re-read your previous snippets to remember they are in a bar. I love that he’s finally found the control he was seeking – such a interesting power balance between them – I wonder how long his control will last. ;)
*fans self* Sensual six, Alix. He teases her so well. :)
A crowd?
Very sexy six!
Hot six and thanks for the image to go with it. Saving that one for when I need inspiration.
Love the battle for dominance you’ve got them playing. I’d say the ball(s) just got lobbed back into her court. (And how!)
Oh, for yum! *Fans*I
Deliciously naughty – I love it!
Cue fainting. All the elements in this are hardcore hot: wrists in his hand, panties slid aside, two (not one, whoa), and then to taste it? How she’s still standing, I’ll never know. Scorching, Alix. Of course, I expect that of you. ;)
Very steamy six. Love the way he’s taking control! DaraAmes.blogspot.com
Ohhhh, steamy six! Great stuff, Alix :D
Hot! Even hotter, that there was a crowd! I’ll have to go back and read your other Six Sentence Sunday posts before this :)