My Muse deserves to Climax

I have been writing away, finishing off Positional Sacrifice and attempting to flesh out the first Act of No Soft Soap. I have a lot to do in the next week, and I am semi confidently forging away. I have been riding Romance hard, perhaps a bit selfishly, so in the style I am writing I want it to be You, I felt it was time I gave him a climax. He really has deserved it.

This snippet is new, not quite polished, a bit raw and very vivid, so please don’t read on if you think I might offend you, and close the browser window now if your under 18.

I was at the point of gushing, my fingers dancing rhythmically deep inside, lubricated in my wet heated urgency. You had slowly increased your pace, riding smoothly in and out of my mouth, my lips pulling tight along your shaft, and then you sliding back, smoothly along my tongue. I curled the tip, caressing the ridge of the head each time it passed. You released the pull of my hair, allowing me to finally move my head, your slight trembles directing me you wanted to come.

You were so hard and stretched, and you had teased me for so long, I knew if I tried I could make you come more than once. Reaching around I grabbed your arse, the muscles tight and strained, working hard to keep your rocking thrusts so steady. Holding you firmly, I took you all out of my mouth and began licking up and down your shaft, you stopped moving, ready to let me devour you, and send you into waves of ecstasy. I moved quickly, your cock glistening from my saliva and straining with your need. Dribbling from of the eye, your pre come tantalized me. Oh god, the memory of how you taste, and the smell of your sweat was driving and fueling my frantic desire. I swirled my tongue around, catching the drip, finally feeding from you and then slowly lowered my mouth right down around your penis.

“Oh, Yeah, that’s it,”  You moaned as I took your whole length, my tongue massaging the underside of your shaft as I imprisoned your cock in my mouth. Pushing it down, even deeper, feeling the muscles in my throat working around you, I knew this would get you to the point of orgasm, my pussy throbbing and aching in anticipation.

Yours hands were stoking my hair, now pushing ever so lightly on my head, just tenderly guiding me around your cock. Your change of touch, telling me I really had pleased you, my juices dripping down my thighs telling me just how much that turns me on. Holding your balls and firmly squeezing them with one hand, I had to fill myself with the other. I was going to explode, and I wanted you to explode all over me. I wanted to feel your hot come on my burning flesh. I forcefully pulled you out and began stocking and pumping your straining cock with my hand, and I took one of your balls into my mouth, gently sucking and licking it, getting lost in the feel of the texture on my tongue.

Oh my god I was finally orgasming, I released you from my mouth. My fingering.furiously  making wet sloppy sounds. I quickly caught my breath and pulled out my fingers, they were covered in my delight. Sitting back, I couldn’t help but smile, and wiped my thick wetness onto the head of your cock, making sure I traced it around with my finger. I knew you’d be transfixed, watching me. I clasped my hand around and pumped your cock again as I bent down and licked my sticky come off the top. You let out a low moan as I presented it on the tip of my tongue. I moved up towards your face, listening to your heavy, deep short breaths. You hungrily found my lips, and I pushed my tongue deep into your mouth. I started to pump you harder and faster, our lips now welded together, sealed into a moment of sizzling sexiness. I slowly withdrew my tongue, my creamy need sliding off and into your mouth.

Your whole body stiffened, and your orgasm started. I bent down and pulled off the blindfold. I had to watch your throbbing erection erupt, your first shot hitting my face, sliding down leaving a sticky warm trail, the second landed across my breast and I rubbed your warmth all over my chest. I had to taste you, and as I opened my mouth, a sticky wad landed right on my lips, dripping down to my chin. I now knew I had pleased you a lot. I cloaked you again into my mouth, hearing you let out another deep primal groan. I slowly pulled up your shaft with my hand, squeezing out every last drop of your come. You finally finished ejaculating, and I pulled my head off your cock, your come leaking from my lips, down my chin and following the line of my throat. I looked up and I finally got to look into your eyes.

8 thoughts on “My Muse deserves to Climax”

  1. Hi ya Ax….its a good job I’m over 18 ( well i think i am ha ha ) Very detailed and highly graphic…..you can just picture the scene oh la la….. ..bet he asks for another date now to ha ha ha!

    Excellently written everything flowing ( literally to ha ha) Ax…be very surprised if you don’t get a lot of work from the magazines or ‘hot’ book deal! \Well done…. catch you on Six Sentence Sunday D :)

  2. Uh, Wow comes to mind. Vivid, yes another good word. Detailed, another, Hot, yes hot, very hot actually. ‘Sticky warm trail’ is now my motto. Uh, hmmm. not much left to say except I’ve now made my bar of soap really really small… Yeah, thats pretty much it.

  3. Very well done! Don’t often see detailed , sensuous hand work in the stories I get. There must be aniche for Onan scenes. This one was quite inspiring–as the man said, maybe too much so. Never mind–Keep them (excuse the expression and cliche) coming!

  4. My wife and I love your story. It kick started our evening very very nicely. Do you have more stories for couples who like to read to each other?

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