A big warm welcome to Six Sentence Sunday, thank you for stopping by, please follow the link to the complete list of fantastic authors and their wonderful stories or search #sixsunday on twitter. This week I am continuing from my short story, Positional Sacrifice.
Struggling to keep control, when his intention in the shower had been to slowly savour her, we were left with him gasping from fellatio and urgently needing to thrust himself deeply inside her again.
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Startled by his sudden almost desperate reaction, she hesitated, but only for a split second. He was so immediate and forceful, hungry to devour her, his driving need encapsulating her in waves of heady delight. She spun around, freeing her arms from his grip, yearning to again feel his burning desire.
She walked her hands down the wall of the shower, the curves of her shape cascading like a sensual silk gown, and rested on the lip of the recess. Instantly he grasped her hips, mesmerized by her beautiful form . She wanted his deep penetration, and in this position she was going to move and control the depths of his urgency.
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I really appreciate and value your comments, so please if you have time, I would love to know what you think. I wanted to share the magic of eyes with you today, I’m in love with the language of a look, and as I discovered Gayle Ramage and Layna Pimental are kindred eye loving spirits, so I set about finding something to gaze at.
I instantly thought about Steve McQueen and how I fell in love with his eyes the first time I saw the chess scene from The Thomas Crown Affair. It is an incredibly erotic and sexy scene, starring the eyes. I found it for you but as it lasts around seven minutes, so when you can sit back, and relax, CLICK HERE.
The clip below is for now, so if for a few seconds you can gaze into Steve McQueen’s eyes to a song from the soundtrack called, His Eyes Her Eyes. It has the most fantastic lyrics. Enjoy.
The Thomas Crown Affair is a film from 1968 starring Steve McQueen and Faye Dunaway
I really hope you enjoy your week, and I am really looking forward to next weeks Six Sunday to give you more of Positional Sacrifice. Take Care.
Romancing Alix 
I really do love that last line Alix! Well done. You get a feel for the desire here. :)
Definitely a flow to the language. Sensual.
What a -gasping for breath- great six! I felt as though I was going along for the ride through your words. Very nice!
Don’t you just love man when he’s so immediate and forceful, hungry to devour her. yum
Great sense of urgency!
~Xakara
Dawn’s Early Light 6SS
It’s got great intensity.
Loved reading your excerpt and will look forward to reading more. really enjoyed the scene from ‘Thomas Crown Affair’ too! Good move!
Nice six. I like how she is in control at the end
Very hot and sensual! Well done!
Very Hot! I loved it. I think I need another shower before I go to work ;)
Steamy and very well written!
I like the ‘watery’ words used in this – “cascading”, “in waves of”, etc. Quite apt since they’re in a shower! Great snippet!
Always love a shower scene…hot water, waves, cascades…yep. HAWT.
Yikes, I need a shower now. Very sexy six!
Wow, very hot! I think I need a shower now – a very cold one. Great Six!
Very steamy and descriptive!
Woooo! Morning.. *fans self* Nice way to start a week.
Hot! Hot!
Hot and I loved every word
Hot six! I loved it!
Love the descriptions – great six!
sensual snippet indeed, and lovely video!
I loved the line ‘the curves of her shape cascading like a sensual silk gown’ – great description.
Oh wow! Sexy with great descriptions! Love this! I want more!
xx
A.
“silk gown” well said
“Cascading like a sensual silk gown” is a lovely phrase, full of alliteration that evokes the image perfectly. Well done!
Gorgeous six! Hot and sensual! And Steve McQueen… mmmm… miss him. :)
Very hot and urgent. Love that. Only a minor suggestion–this sentence: “Instantly he grasped her hips, mesmerized by her beautiful form.” seems to shift into his POV, when the rest of the excerpt is from hers. Just a thought, and didn’t detract from my enjoyment of your six!
You are so right, I seem to jump POV a lot in the draft. Definitely something to do a whole read through and revision on. Thank you so much for your feedback, I really appreciate it.
Nice sense of urgency : )
That is a very hot and steamy shower scene!
Very evocative six!
Steamy.
Very steamy! Loved the flow of your words.
Beautiful and sensual. I was drawn right into the shower with them. Which was very nice indeed!
This oozes with desire. Great 6
Wow. That’s is becoming one great shower scene
Steamy as always! I just love your 6’s!
Exceptional use of description to lead the reader along for the ride. I caught my breath! Great job!
Wow! Well done. I noticed the POV change, too, but I kind of like having both.
I have to find a way to separate the characters in my mind, the POV seems to jump around a lot in the draft.
like many of the comments above….loved the line cascading like a sensual gown…very provacative….text just flowing….great six Ax!
Sexy hot scene with her in control…. love it!
Very sensual. Hot snip!
Very, very sexy–yet you still manage to capture the emotion and urgency. Very well done.
Oh, now where’s my husband when I need him?
Love it! Very hot!
Wow, hot! I love shower scenes!
“She walked her hands down the wall of the shower, the curves of her shape cascading like a sensual silk gown” – that is beautiful! Love it so much!
I like both versions of the Thomas Crown Affair but the chess scene makes the original my fave. That, and McQueen! That chess scene is sexier than most of the more explicit sex scenes in newer movies.
It really is such a sexy sexy sexy scene. McQueen and Dunaway have the perfect chemistry for it.
I don’t know how her curves could cascade like a silk gown, but it’s a pretty phrase.
I noticed the POV shift, too, but only after the second reading! The first time through, I was caught up in the action. Very sensual.
Sexy six, as usual!
Heady need, sensuality, and heat all wrapped up in a nice SSS snippet! Well done! And who doesn’t like Steve McQueen? YUM!
Sexy six! Me like :)
Gorgeous snippet!
Very sexy six. See you next week!
So much to say here. The excerpt was sensuous, sexy. I love the remake of The Thomas Crown Affair. And, I love the vintage photo in your most recent post. It’s so fun and unexpected.