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My six sentences today are in celebration of the blogs 1st Anniversary. These are the first six sentences of I Want it to be You, an erotica story that lead me in a new direction.
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I heard you call out. You seemed angry, I urgently searched my mind but I couldn’t think of anything that could have set you off. I have been pleasing you a lot lately, well at least, I thought I had.
I hurriedly checked my outfit was all in place: the short black halter necked dress that scooped right down to the curve of my bum, seamed back fishnets on a beautiful black lace suspender belt, black patent leather four and half inch heels and my two inch wide, black leather collar fastened around my neck. I was wearing exactly what you had told me to. You always insist, you must be able to see my back, to know I’m not wearing a bra
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Sexy six! I love that she’s so uncertain – this will no doubt lead to marvellous conflict :D
Happy Anniversary!! Her worry is sweet, but what is she missing?
So very sexy! Love the outfit.
Your writing, your snippets are so realistic and hot. I can’t say I have a favorite because all of them are my favorite.
Very sexy outfit!
I like the tension you’ve built in my mind. There’s an unsettling mixture of dread and excitement in these six.
Happy Anniversary! so what’s her problem —or is it someone else’s problem?? Love the bra comment
The insecurity is palpable, and the unknown future heightens the tension to a delicious point. And her need to please is touching.
“At least I thought I had..” Nice wording.
Her need for his approval is palpable and very sexy! Love it!
Very tense! And congrats on your anniversary.
Love the way the story starts! Sexy and tense, great six! Congratulations on your one year anniversary as well!
Such intensity in so few lines! Love the outfit, btw! This drew me in from word-one, leaving me curious to know if he’ll be angry or pleased with her… Great six!!
A sexy six! And congrats on your blogs anniversary! :)
I love the undertone in this six. Very nice job. Also, happy blog anniversary!
Oh, she seems so eager to please! I hope he’s not really mad… She sounds delicious to me. :)
I love her voice! Just submissive enough, but not like a doormat. And love that he always has to see her back. Nice detail. Great six!
Great imagery, l could see that dress so clearly, and l want one!
Wonderful. Simply wonderful, Alix. Great 6!
Happy blog birthday, and what a great six to celebrate it. There was intrigue in the opening six lines and there was intrigue in the introduction. You have me curious…
Hot six, Alix. I loved the description of her outfit. Great six. :)
Writing this in the first person definitely made it hotter. I think you’ve inspired me to get the guts to clean up one of my one old pieces and post it! And I love your Six Sentence Sundays. Great idea!
Great six! Congratulations on the first anniversary!