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This week we pick back up from our hero wanting her so much he couldn’t move.
Read the last snippet here …..Six Sentence Sunday 36
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I had thought over and over what it would be like to see her again. But now, with her hair sweeping over her shoulder and the sweet sound of her voice drugging my thoughts, I was blank. The masterful, seductive comments and sexy manuvers I had been meticulously practising escaped me.
Frozen. Fear, emotion and desire my chains.
How can I keep her?
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I love reading his emotions. :) And I love the thought of him practicing, and all of it for naught. LOL Great six.
Love how she steals away his thoughts! Great six! :)
Awww, love this peek into how he feels. Fab.
Why the fear? Loved how she stole his ability to think straight.
I love these six sentences! Excellent – is this story published yet?
Succinct and poetic. Very, very nice.
Wow, knocked off his feet. Love the sense of longing that runs through this.
Dude, go with it! Love how you’ve worked deeper emotions into something he thought would be purely physical.
That’s some deep POV right there! Good job!
I’m sure he’ll find a way to warm up – nice to hear a man have doubts for a change too
Aw, self doubt? Love the emotion in this six, and the photo suits it perfectly!
Your writing sucks me in like a high-pressured vortex. Why am I smiling that he drew a blank and his thoughts, frozen? Aw — the power of a woman.
Interesting that he feels chained and now wants to ‘keep’ her. Hmm, me’thinks this could turn dark. Then again, love often totters that fine line, eh?
I love the hint of vulnerability he shows here!
I love that he’s longing to keep her. His vulnerability is sexy!
Nice and intense :-)
Isn’t that always the way, we rehearse scenes in our heads over and over, but when presented with opportunity, we come up with sweet nothing.
Great six :)
I love this is from a man’s pov. Nicely done!
I love his emotion here and how they’re “his chains”. Well written :)
Oh, that was beautiful. I love how the thought of her strips all the pretense away and leaves him open. Lovely.
His almost plaintive cry perfectly captures the hold she has on him. Well done, Alix!
I love that he’s been practicing… and that she’s made him forget it all. Wonderful description of his emotions.
I totally love this six! Such depth of emotion from him! Last line had me swooning!
I love a vulnerable hero. Great six!!
An impression has been made, apparently. And this moment happens to us all–which makes your hero appealing. He’s one of us, i.e. human.
The reality is never what we imagine.
Sometimes the moment is so overwhelming that words will fail… this is one of those times. Very nicely done.
The subtext of this scene gives great insight into the characters. Nice job!
aahh, a heady mix of his lust and love, intwined … as if lost within the two. Great lines Ax. :)
I really feel it too; lust and something tender as well. Beautiful six!
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